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DramaWe bring the what (what) x 4We bring the drama (c?mon) x 4(Chorus)We bring the dramaIf you want it getting highCome along and take rideJust hop in and get insideC?mon, We bring the dramaIf you?re thinking that you couldYou should be thinking that you shouldIt?s not like we never wouldC?mon, We bring the dramaWe got diamonds in our ringsEverything that money bringsDrama comes in songs we singC?mon, We bring the dramaIf you need it, then we?ll get itWhat we got, you won?t forget itGet your money we?ll out bet itC?mon, We bring the drama(Verse)Yeah we bring the dramaLike no-one ever did beforeWe?ll give you moreWe?ll give you fourAnd if you want we?ll give you moreGalore, for sureWith your back against the doorIgnore, the othersThey?re only here to boreNow I respect the lawBut I contradict the warSo I'm feeling as though I'm gonna have to give it to you rawTake you straight into my coreThe door, is open to take you up to the next floorWhat?s moreNo-one?s ever put it down like this beforeYou ain't heard it like thisSo tell me what?s the scoreNine out of tenI?ll tell you what I?d probably give it moreTen out of ten the perfect scoreGot people searching for a flawBut there isn?t oneGot people searching for a gunCos they can't take it anymoreNow that we?re number oneThe funHas only just begunYou?ll succumb, to us, within seconds you?re on the runOne by oneYou?ll be thinkingI wish I hadn?t comeWere next to noneAnd that?s, the feelings of everyoneYou do the maths, we give the sumIt?s as simple as one plus oneThen I hear you hollering?.But who?s the oneWe bring the what (what) x 4We bring the drama (c?mon) x 4(Chorus)We bring the dramaIf you want it getting highCome along and take rideJust hop in and get insideC?mon, We bring the dramaIf you?re thinking that you couldYou should be thinking that you shouldIt?s not like we never wouldC?mon, We bring the dramaWe got diamonds in our ringsEverything that money bringsDrama comes in songs we singC?mon, We bring the dramaIf you need it, then we?ll get itWhat we got, you won?t forget itGet your money we?ll out bet itC?mon, We bring the drama(Verse)Now, they come with their AK-47?sTheir Banana clipsTheir finger slips, and we all go to heavenBut there?s a lessonSo use it and listenDon?t be a fool, go to schoolAnd realise your ambitionWhat you wantYou can get it if you stick to your missionYou too can bring the drama if you never stop wishingOr dreamingNot all dreams come trueBut it?s up to youTo make best use of the one?s that doYou know why?(Why?)Cos no-one else chooses the pathFollows the cracks in the roadProbably some they shouldn?t haveAnd it?s sadTo think, we all make mistakesBut the bigger man owns upKnowing they come day after dayAnd by the wayNow, the drama is comingThey?re runningTrying to find another hummer to hum inTo sing in, to talk inUntil another one walks inAnd then the talking stops?One shot?Two shot?It don?t stop?Till someone calls the copsThe crime sceneIs seen, as a thing of the pastIn the futureThey?ll take for granted *BLEEP* we never hadIt?s too badPeople feel sorry for themselves all the timeAll they do is whineIt?s like ?In my timeMy day We never had TV?s or Pc?sWe had to entertain ourselves all day?Well guess what(What)I wasn?t alive in your timeYour dayAnd I don?t care anywayYou say what (what)We bring the what (what) x 3We bring the drama (c?mon) x 4(Chorus)We bring the dramaIf you want it getting highCome along and take rideJust hop in and get insideC?mon, We bring the dramaIf you?re thinking that you couldYou should be thinking that you shouldIt?s not like we never wouldC?mon, We bring the dramaWe got diamonds in our ringsEverything that money bringsDrama comes in songs we singC?mon, We bring the dramaIf you need it, then we?ll get itWhat we got, you won?t forget itGet your money we?ll out bet itC?mon, We bring the drama(Verse)Right, we hereFinally we?ve arrivedNow its timeFor the whole world to brush asideThe doors open and everything comes aliveLights, camera, action, take 55Yeah it?s taken timeBut practice leads to perfectionCorrection, there?s no such thingIt?s just a hidden conceptionDeception, at it?s greatest?Now they asking us how we made thisLet?s face it Its time, we took you all back to the basicsTo the basisTake a beat and a rhyme and place itWith a melodyIt?ll sell ya?ll seeAs long as the rhyming?s thereAnd the lyrics ain't make believeThe public they want the truthMake it sound like how you feelThat?s the dealNowadays all you gotta do is keep it realConnections? make a connection with the peopleYou gotta be trying to make it your eyes the ones they see throughFeel your pain, your joyHelp others through what you?ve been throughAnd for the hardcoreYou gotta give them what they ask forThe Drama?.?.That?s what we bring u!We bring the what (what) x 4We bring the drama (c?mon) x 4(Chorus)We bring the dramaIf you want it getting highCome along and take rideJust hop in and get insideC?mon, We bring the dramaIf you?re thinking that you couldYou should be thinking that you shouldIt?s not like we never wouldC?mon, We bring the dramaWe got diamonds in our ringsEverything that money bringsDrama comes in songs we singC?mon, We bring the dramaIf you need it, then we?ll get itWhat we got, you won?t forget itGet your money we?ll out bet itC?mon, We bring the dramaWe bring the what (what) x 4We bring the drama (c?mon) x 4

let me know what you think(Chorus)We bring the dramaIf you want it getting highCome along and take rideJust hop in and get insideC?mon, We bring the dramaIf you?re thinking that you couldYou should be thinking that you shouldIt?s not like we never wouldC?mon, We bring the dramaWe got diamonds in our ringsEverything that money bringsDrama comes in songs we singC?mon, We bring the dramaIf you need it, then we?ll get itWhat we got, you won?t forget itGet your money we?ll out bet itC?mon, We bring the dramaI've nearly finished this song so hopefully the full version will be on soon! feedback appreciated, thnx

This is my new chorus tell me what u think*()= talkin*(And she asked me, who is your dream girl?........)My dream girl is, the one who makes me wanna wake up in the morningMakes my heart beat faster without warningWho makes the butterflies in my stomach rollLike you'd never noOne who cares for meWho's always there for meTo trust and believeNever gonna leaveOne who makes me smileDrives my feelings wildAnd if she asked me whoI'd say.....that girl is you

lol its not that long bout 4 mins, its rap so the verses are quite long. Thats the trouble although i know the tune no-one else does whilst readin it!

lol thnx, yeah takes ages getting a song right!!

lol yeah thnx, it is more hip hop, i've written a few songs now, most like that about getting my feelings out, that's why i write them.

That ryhme is really good! Nice work!!

Thank you all for such positive feedback! i really am grateful, and im glad u liked it. Yeah it was from firsthand experience from what i'd been through, i believe thats the best way to write songs or the true meaning doesnt get potrayed correctly. I only really write songs, i havn't the resources to compose, but thats a wish i would love to come true!

Me Myself and I(Verse)I?ve been living this lifeFeeling likeI ain?t worth nothing?Cos nothing?s working for meI feel like I wanna hurt somethingThe anger surrounds me, pounds me, then it grounds meTill? it all comes out and hurts everyone around meSometimes I can't help it; it?s just the way I amBut I live my life telling myself if I can do it I canSo tell myself to stop, its simple rightBut that?s the problem seeI haven?t the confidence I needTo determine I succeedBut why do thesePeople, determine I don?t proceedI?m talking to all of ya?ll?Cos ya?ll left me on my kneesWhen I was hated, discriminated Ya?ll chose not to seeSo pleaseWhen you need me don?t expect me to beRunning to help you outI wish I had the power to freezeAll of theseHaters, who made usFeel like I?m at the bottom of the seaLeft to freeze Negative one hundred degrees (Chorus)Imagine life being kicked and hitNo-one giving a *BLEEP*It?s just me myself and I Imagine you die and no-one asks whyThey don?t even cryIt?s just me myself and IThat?s what I?m sayingIt?s just me myself and IDay out and day inIt?s just me myself and INobody elseIt?s just me myself and IAll by myselfIt?s just me myself and I (Verse)It might be right for meTo be rightfullyLiving my life for freeAnd all ya?ll might seeMe having funBut the chances of that happening are next to noneCos no-one knows what?s going on inside of meIt?s like a game of hide ?n? seekPut the good things to one side and the wrong things leakNo-one knows the help I needTo satisfy my greedAnd make sure I leaveRight on time, dead on oneCos that?s the number of times in life I?ve had funWhy are ya?ll determined to put me downMake me frownI always feel like I?m trying to catch my breatheAlmost as if I?m dieing to drown and reach my deathCos hell?s gotta be better than life itselfNo need to worry about your wealthOr even your healthIt?s just me and myselfAnd I?m used to living like thatIt?ll be no difference to meIt?ll be like moving houseBut only moving next doorOr like changing flatsBut only changing the floorThe only thing isWhere you were before the insurance is moreI thought of moving myselfBut I can't afford to do thatCos the price of moving upstairs is life and that?s thatCos I ain?t ready to dieBut I ain't wanting to liveIt?s like I?m stuck on the stairwayStuck on step number sixStuck in the middleEverywhere I look is a pile of *BLEEP*But I don?t expect you to careThat?s why I'm telling you this (Chorus)Imagine life being kicked and hitNo-one giving a *BLEEP*It?s just me myself and I Imagine you die and no-one asks whyThey don?t even cryIt?s just me myself and IThat?s what I?m sayingIt?s just me myself and IDay out and day inIt?s just me myself and INobody elseIt?s just me myself and IAll by myselfIt?s just me myself and I (Verse)Why, was IBlessed with the devils looksLow self esteem?Tell me about it, I had it in bundles and hooksFor a whileI couldn?t even look in the mirrorOr even smileEvery night I would cry me a riverI had a, disease that was holding me backI hated itTell me god why you cursed me with thatI found it hard to make friendsLet alone get a girlPeople would judge me before they knew meI felt I was living in hellThe doctors couldn?t help meTheir drugs did nothing at allSo I went to hospitalIn a bid to free me once and for allI was starting college in half a yearAnd I wanted a fresh startThe name calling at school had started to tear me apartBut I let it go over meDidn?t want to let it showBut insideConstantly cryingCouldn?t let nobody knowI didn?t think they would understand meOr feel how I feltIt?s like the cards they would hand meWeren?t the ones I was dealtI felt, a problem was the strength of the nationBut I hadn?t the guts to find the reality of reincarnationConstantly, searching for a human being relationBut the station tuned in was on leaving probationThe nation, looked down on meThat?s how I feltThe worst thing was, couldn?t nobody helpAnd it all happened during my teenage yearsWhen I embraced in my fearsCouldn?t even talk to my peersAnd they say during these years you learn the mostIf that were true I?d be dead nowAnd I ain't even closeSo, even if you question my styleI?ma stay strong no matter how long the trialAnd whether right or wrong I ain't running a mileSo get used to me, I?ma be here a while (Chorus)Imagine life being kicked and hitNo-one giving a *BLEEP*It?s just me myself and I Imagine you die and no-one asks whyThey don?t even cryIt?s just me myself and IThat?s what I?m sayingIt?s just me myself and IDay out and day inIt?s just me myself and INobody elseIt?s just me myself and IAll by myselfIt?s just me myself and I

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Loyalty Beyond Recognition (Verse) The fear of the end is what we fear today We know it?s coming but we stay scared anyway We can?t stop it There?s nothing we can do or can say But if we pray Maybe time till the end will delay But if someone?s life depended solely on yours We you turn off the lights And would you close all the doors If that someone was someone you really cared for Would you give them their life And sacrifice yours It?s not a decision that many of us have to make But I doubt there?s many people out there willing to take Their own life for the chance that someone else could survive Cos by the time they made up their mind I doubt they?re alive But if you did they probably wouldn?t recognise The loyalty behind it all it ain?t clear in their eyes Or their mind But given time I think you will find We only see what we want to see But most of us can?t be what we want to be Cos that?s the definition of perfection Tell me, what do you see when you look in your reflection Hopefully not a lie But not the truth The truth hurts too much, it damages the youth And there?s proof Loyalty without praise is better than with Although it?s nice to take, I assure it?s better to give So if there?s someone out there you really care for And you were loyal to them but they just seem to ignore Don?t take heed from that Give yourself a pat on the back Cos you can feel proud and no-one can take away that (Chorus) Loyalty beyond recognition If you take their guns away who?s gonna miss ?em Protecting their sons all day while they listen As we become one and say that we wish ?em Loyalty beyond recognition If you take their guns away who?s gonna miss ?em Protecting their sons all day while they listen As we become one and say that we wish ?em Loyalty beyond recognition (Verse) That?s what we wish ?em Don?t let their sons and guns become one That?s the tuition The superstition That crossing on the stairs brings bad luck Is it true? Well give it a try and see if your face get f****d up And if it does who?s to say it was even linked For all we know it?s a coincidence Stop and think Do these, superstitious myths even matter Should we, watch out in case we walk under a ladder Well I broke a mirror when I was only five Yeah I had seven years bad luck but at least I?m still alive I didn?t realise That this was just the story of my life But if I?d had the time, to focus my mind Maybe I?d of had the courage and strength to cross the line But I just accepted it That?s just the way it is So *BLEEP* the rest of it But everyday I wish That we could Make a change for the better Together forever We could rule the world Never say never But when I look in your eyes I see a devilish side The type that creates another level inside But the feelings I have, they couldn?t be stronger They build up inside I can?t wait any longer For the feelings I hate, to escape The debate, can?t go on any longer Loyalty creates a bond that couldn?t be stronger But it can?t be seen that?s the twist to this Although it may seem this takes the p**s a bit If you were loyal to someone and they don?t know The bond becomes bigger ?til it no longer can grow (Chorus) Loyalty beyond recognition If you take their guns away who?s gonna miss ?em Protecting their sons all day while they listen As we become one and say that we wish ?em Loyalty beyond recognition If you take their guns away who?s gonna miss ?em Protecting their sons all day while they listen As we become one and say that we wish ?em Loyalty beyond recognition (Verse) Takin? time out from bein? the jury for the judge ?cos I?m sick ?n? tired of sending people down for showing love There?s plenty of people who take the blame of murder For someone they love, love you couldn?t take any further Have you heard a Innocent until proven guilty That?s bulls**t, ?cos lies aint the truth you feel me How can u prove someone?s guilty with lies If you look in their eyes You can see it?s just a disguise But their demise, is done in the name of love It hurts to see them get locked up like thugs But at the end of the day It?s their choice to make Are they doing the right thing? That?s an ongoing debate Now let me demonstrate And eliminate the feelings of hate It?s irate by the prison gates As we sit and wait While they investigate They manipulate until they?ve chosen a date But wait All the people victimised You?d be surprised The amount of times lives left behind But do you feel or understand what I?m saying to you ?Cos I need a demonstration of the view I?m portraying to you At the end of the day you wouldn?t give your life for But given the chance I hope you?d put up a good fight for me Rightfully, life might be free But the anarchy of it all brings me to my knees So please When loyalty?s rejected think again The key is in the lock, so you win, not them (Chorus) Loyalty beyond recognition If you take their guns away who?s gonna miss ?em Protecting their sons all day while they listen As we become one and say that we wish ?em Loyalty beyond recognition If you take their guns away who?s gonna miss ?em Protecting their sons all day while they listen As we become one and say that we wish ?em Loyalty beyond recognition

Thnx. Its a great way of getting your feelings out, writing songs. Thats why i write them anyway.

Thnx. I just write songz in my spare time, as a way of expressing my feelings.

just a rap i wrote....plz let me no wat u thinkYou Know I Know(Chorus)You Know, I ain?t goin? nowhere I?m staying on fireAnd I know that if I go I?ll come back much higher?Cos you know I knowAnd I know you knowThat I know about you but I ain?t here for the ride(Verse)Going back toThe old school rulesThe media was coolThey make you famous n?allBut that was all bull ? s**tThey just look for someone who?s down and then they take a hitDon?t get caught up in the mixIf you do ya?ll end up regretting inIt?s just a load of tricksEvery bit of it it?s s**tWhen I was younger I always wanted to be famousI didn?t realise I?d need so much f*****g patienceIt?s the same every day in the paperAnother rapper?s b***h claimin that he raped herIt?s like we?re being victimised by the PaparazziIt?s propaganda, a tactic used by the Nazi?sAnd I ain?t even made it yet but I?ve a bad nameJust ?cos I?m a rapper and I?m white but who?s to blameIt?s not like I?m on my own I?ve got Em by my sideBut I doubt he?d let me rideSo I guess it?s back to that 9-5All my lifeI?ve been waitin for this day to comeIntroducing myself, me and fame become oneBut it wasn?t what I thought it would beLife as a celebrity just ain?t the one for meBut it?s a small price to pay with the packetSo this time I?m determined im?a crack it(Chorus) You Know, I ain?t goin? nowhere I?m staying on fireAnd I know that if I go I?ll come back much higher?Cos you know I knowAnd I know you knowI ain?t goin? nowhere I?m staying on fireAnd I know that if I go I?ll come back much higher?Cos you know I knowAnd I know you knowThat I know about you but I ain?t here for the ride(Verse) If you think ICould go to your sideYou wrongBring it onCome and get itIf not then forget it?Cos I ain?t waitin for longWhat?s wrong?Don?t you like it when I, take a stand for myselfMake a band of myselfGet around you with stealthMan I?m rich in wealthBut I?d prefer it in healthWhat the hell!?Oh wellI never made it to jailI knew if I did my family couldn?t afford the bailBut I can?t lie about it I had a good life growing upCompared to the hood life I had so f*****g muchExcept respect and loyalty towards othersThat?s what you get in the hood you learn to love your brothersSomeone to cover for you when you need itIt brings out the mother in you, I couldn?t believe itThe difference between this and thatSomeone to protect your backI don?t have thatBut what I do have is thisThe strength to come back from being dissedSo the media, you wanna play your tricksI ain?t gonna cry about itIt?ll take more hitsBut I know you lie about itWhat you writes all s**t(Bridge)And you know, everybody thrives on hitsAnd I know, it ain?t gonna arrive that quickBut we know, we can make it if we just don?t quitEveryone knows, the media?s full of dirty tricksAnd you know, everybody thrives on hitsAnd I know, it ain?t gonna arrive that quickBut we know, we can make it if we just don?t quitEveryone knows, the media?s full of dirty tricks(Chorus) You Know, I ain?t goin? nowhere I?m staying on fireAnd I know that if I go I?ll come back much higher?Cos you know I knowAnd I know you knowI ain?t goin? nowhere I?m staying on fireAnd I know that if I go I?ll come back much higher?Cos you know I knowAnd I know you knowThat I know about you but I ain?t here for the ride(Bridge)And you know, everybody thrives on hitsAnd I know, it ain?t gonna arrive that quickBut we know, we can make it if we just don?t quitEveryone knows, the media?s full of dirty tricksAnd you know, everybody thrives on hitsAnd I know, it ain?t gonna arrive that quickBut we know, we can make it if we just don?t quitEveryone knows, the media?s full of dirty tricks(Chorus)You Know, I ain?t goin? nowhere I?m staying on fireAnd I know that if I go I?ll come back much higher?Cos you know I knowAnd I know you knowThat I know about you but I ain?t here for the ride