I have a couple of novels I would like people to read and give feed back as well as ideas on what to do next. the first it The Gems Of Noya. CHAPTERS 1 TO 3.THE OLD ONES Some time deep in Lasador's dark past a war was fought between the eight god's of Noya. The gods fought for many years completely unaware of a ninth god biding his time. By the time they found out it was to late. With the death of Veletor god of light and one of the original eight gods of Noya. The remaining seven original gods fled to Cloy were Veletor's body lay. But there was no body in it's place was a pedestal and set within it was a large red ruby with Veletor's symbol of power. The gods then devised a spell using the gem they destroyed the ninth god. But in doing so they destroyed themselves as well. There gems were scattered through out the lands. And there powers lost to the world of man.THE BOOK OF LIGHT ?Vrail, Lord Tobias wishes you to gather the other children and meet him in the abandoned library as quickly as you can.? ?We'll be right there Sir Kren!? Replied Vrail as he ran up to tell the others. Vrail a tall green eyed blond haired fourteen year old boy and the oldest of the eight children. He was meet by the stunning tall blue eyed brawn haired thirteen year old girl named Kayla. And behind her was Jon an eleven year old boy with silver hair and brawn eyes. Haret also a ten year old boy with black hair and cold blue eyes. Leasa the first of twines both with black eyes and white hair. And Lexy the secant of twins and the smallest of the eight children. Together alone with Vrail they all headed towards the abandoned library. To summers ago the children were playing in the castles' library wen a bolder shot from a catapult slammed into the west wing of the castle with such fours it shook every thing. As the children ran for cover a wall lined with pictures of past kings collapsed. Behind the wall was a long hall ending with a flight of stairs leading dawn into darkness. The children raced to Lord Tobias and told him of there discovery. Who then told the king. King Hennry then ordered Lord Tobias and the children to document every book and scroll to find out why the library was hidden. It's been two years and the king built a new castle and gave the old one to Tobias for his services to him. They been dawn there documenting everything. The children meet Lord Tobias at a long table in the center of the abandoned library. ?Come sit dawn children I found something interesting here today so fare all the books and scrolls have had little recollection of Elair's history that we can read. All but this one it was found in a fake panel behind one of the shelf's. There was a note attached to it that said something along the line of ?This book holds meany secrets about this place and tells about the legends of the past and what happened here so long ago.? ?But wen I finished reading the note it bust into flames now it's ash's move about the flour.? Said Lord Tobias as the children sat at the table. Before them on the table was a book like non they have ever seen and they have seen a lot considering. The book before them was bound in a unusual silver material. The book all so had gold symbols and there is the mater of opening it. There was no desirable way to do so the pages wood not move and then there was the buckle or what seemed to be no mater haw hard they tried they could not get it opened so that they could look at the pages more closely. ?That's not even the weirdest thing about the book do you want to know what happened wen I touched it?? Asked Tobias ?Yes!? Exclaimed the children. ?Well at first nothing then after the note burned I turned my attention back to the book and wen placed my hand on the book it turned red like this.? Said Tobias as he demonstrated to show that claim as true and like before the book turned blood red. Wen he removed his hand from the book it turned back to it's original colors. The children were intrigued but were reluctant to touch it for they did not what would happen or if it can hurt then. Vrail was the first to reached out and touched the book for him however the book glowed with a soft light at first then grow harsh just as he removed his hand from the book. The rest of the children reached out and touched the book one at a time and the book did the same for the rest of the children. Then Tobias had an idea witch he put into action immediately he said. ?I have an idea I want for you all to touch the book at the same time and see what happens.?THE DARKNESS ?I don't think we should I mean why did the book glow bright for us and glow red for you Tobias?? Asked Vrail. ?I don't know Vrail and I can see why you are so skeptical it is quite strange but lets find out!? Replied Tobias. After a moments desition and a lot of persuasion from his friends he finally agreed. And together the eight children touched the book. The moment they did the book began to glow brighter and brighter with every touch. Till it was all most blinding them. Then the light died suddenly casting them into darkness. After a minute or two there eyes adjusted to the darkness. Only then did the children notes the book was pulsating on the table they exclaimed! ?Lord Todias look the book it's pulsating, Lord Tobias!? ?I don't think he's going to answerer us.? Said Vrail to the others as he got up to face Lord Tobias. ?Why not?? Asked Kayla. ?He's dead isn't he?? Asked Jon. ?Looks like it.? Replied Vrail. ?We need help quick come on we need Sir Kren!? Said Nick ?Leave the book!? Said Vrail just as Myrtle reached out to grab it. They turned and ran up the staircase. The children ran dawn the long hall wen they reached the end of the hall and pasted through the thresh hold of the library there was a loud crashing sound behind them. The children whirled around to face the hall they just came from for the sound came from within that direction. But there was no hall but a wall it looked as if its been there the hole time. But the wall had the same symbols the book had. ?Well that's just great haw do we get back dawn to the library now or to Lord Tobia's body?? asked Kayla. As they continued to find Kren. ?I know haw to open it we do the same thing we did to the book all eight of us must touch the wall for it to open!? Answer Vrail. ?And you know that how exactly?? Questing the others. ?It seas it on the wall back there.? gestured Vrail in the direction of the wall only twenty feet away from them. ?Oh, I see it now.? said the other children. They continued running then they all stopped simultaneously and turned back to the wall one thought ran through there mind they can read the wall there for the book. They soon arrived at Sir Kren's chambers and found him dead as well. Not knowing what else to do they ran into the court yard and gasped they were all dead every one is dead except them but that was not the only thing that was weird the sky was black not as if it was night but wheres there was nothing know light could be seen above not even from the still burning torch light as they scanned the horizon they could see around the edge of there site that it was only mid day. Then as to add to there unease the wind began to blow stronger and stronger but it was different it was not just cold it was as if it could bring death dawn upon them if they stayed here any longer. They know or rather hoped they know that the rest on Noya was safe for now at least. They ran not knowing what else to do they ran to the only place they know the kings court but that was a long way away there was a sound like no other they have herd coming from above wen they looked they could see a shape in the sky nothing more then it was gone. They increased there passe now wen they looked dawn they came to a quick halt for they all most ran into horse men they realized they were the king's men and they were glad for there arrival witch means that they sow what happened and came to help. ? Come With Us Young Masters We Will Take You To The King!? they yelled because as they spoke the wind rose stronger then they though possible. ?The King Will Wont To Know What happened Here And What All The Light And Horrific Sounds Were Coming From.? Yelled the knight's again. ?From what you just said we are missing info to.? Sail Vrail. ?Were is Lord Tobias and Sir Kren we had strict orders to take them and you the the king promptly?? The knight's asked. ?There dead along with every one else.? Replied the children. The knight's had trouble getting the children on there horses for no mater how hard they tried to lift them on there horses the wind would push them dawn it was as if the wind or rather what was it the wind for now one could see the wind blowing and it was black like every thing else the wind also whisper dreadful thing things best left unsaid and with the bead. Finally they were off going towards the king and to safety. When they arrived they were ushered in and immediately taken to the king. The children and the king exchanged there knowledge on what happened. ? So my friends are dead because you found and touched a book that bib who knows what to or with them for we don't know if they are relay dead or not the few we have here seem to be dead but yet they sleep and speak yet wen they were cut open there was nothing inside them they were empty and yet they still spoke as if they were unaware they were dead or living. The king had a hand full of guards go to the estate and clean up the mess the body's were brought to the king and examined. The children were sen to the guest chambers and told they were able to sleep there for the knight.