Helpful Criticism Of My Website Please

Hey hey.. I'm made a personal homepage using flash, my first attempt at one. Do let me know what you think of it and how I can improve on it. thanks

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Maybe make the arrows for navigating through the pictures a bit lighter because they're hard to spot at first glance.

Nice flash animation though i would prefer a stationary tag with links on the top.

It looks great, I've never seen any sort of navigaition like that. Just keep the blogs updated and you will have an excellent site.

Try centering everything on your site. It looks more professional that way. Also, remove that border around the flash content, similar to the one "Walking with Jesus".. If possible, place the ads below the "Walking with Jesus" flash animation or place it right at the bottom of your page. It doesn't look good on top of your site.Anyway, nice flash site.

Thanks for all your replies guys.. I'll certainly make modifications to them.. about the ad, i'm not sure how I can shift the position of the ads. But i'm hoping to shift my site to Xisto.com.. hopefully there won't be this ad problem..I saw this menu from somewhere before and I sort of copied it. hehe..

Well..I really like your site, it is great! The thing is that it is so happy and live with all the shiny colors and stuff - i think that it is perfect for what it serves for - a few pictures and blogs of a couple! I doesn't need to look too professional, because that would ruin this cosy feeling one gets when one enters your site...Just keep up the good work and don't fix too much :lol:greetz

cool.. thanks man.. those are really encouraging words.. keep telling myself to keep it simple, keep it simple.. haha..

Your site is beautiful. I like your style. Really unique. Are you sure its your first attempt at making a flash site? It looks quiet professional too me. I made a flash site too, but yours looks much more professional then mine. Well done! Keep it going.

nicely done..., ive never seen that Nav bar style B4-Very Unique.GOOD WORK!!!!

Wow.. thanks for all your comments.. keep them coming.. criticism welcomed too..Nani Cheri: Yes this is my first attempt. I actually copied ideas from a professional website template. (Hopefully I'm not offending or infringing on anything) Maybe that explains the professional look. But I'm humbled by your comments, I'll continue to improve on my site.. Fallen in love with flash at the moment.. haha..Piper-4-hire: Agreed, when I first saw it I was like I got to make my site look like that.. Thankfully I managed to do it..

hmm.. I guess this thread shall be shifted to a Xisto hosted forum? Nice site still although not much changes. Get some alignment right and it's way to go. Currently the strong point of your site is still your flash content. However the overall alignment with the tagboard is abit "out".. So make them centered and it should be done..Anyway, it's 3am SG time, arn't you asleep? :lol:I'm sleeping soon...