millertime 0 Report post Posted March 25, 2005 Perfect: I've been in search Night after night For the perfect words To describe how right It feels to be with you And how wonderfull you make me feel how somehow i just knew That this love is real How you're all i think about And i miss you when you're gone how i have no doubt That next to you is where i belong But words could never prove How committed i am to you So all i can do Is offer this simple poem to you More then you know: Eyes like the sky One look and time flies by I feel the warmth of your face As i begin to trace Every line, every scar That helps define you who you are But beneath this exterior Lies something superior A woman that is true And feels exactly like i do The deeper i look, the longer i stare The more i see all that is there You are so much more than you know And these words will never be able to show How much i adore you Or how you taught me to trust And how much i need you Or how much i love us .... just two more poems i have written, please give some feedback on them Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Spazz 0 Report post Posted March 25, 2005 Hey those are really good i would never ever be able to write soemthing so good Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
thebluekirby 0 Report post Posted March 25, 2005 those are really good, I could never write as good as you if I tried . Your so creative Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
millertime 0 Report post Posted March 25, 2005 thanks. thats means a lot i'm sure you could. these i wrote to my girlfriend back when we were going out, but now thats over so i figured i would share them with the public. just try your hand at it, i'm sure you would do just fine. all you have to do is write down what your thinking and make it rhyme lol.... simple as that Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
ghettohabbo 0 Report post Posted March 25, 2005 1 word, 1000 meanings, 2 syllables. Coolio! I have never viewed the creativity topic before. Anyways your poems are quite good. Keep up the good work if you are going to make more poems. I used to make parody for songs, until 1 of mine went too far and I got banned on one of the forums for it. Eh... hope to see more of your poems around xD Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
sparkliestars11 0 Report post Posted March 25, 2005 Absolutely beautiful. I've always wished that i could write poetry. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
