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2 Poems Of Mine

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Perfect:

 

I've been in search

Night after night

For the perfect words

To describe how right

It feels to be with you

And how wonderfull you make me feel

how somehow i just knew

That this love is real

How you're all i think about

And i miss you when you're gone

how i have no doubt

That next to you is where i belong

But words could never prove

How committed i am to you

So all i can do

Is offer this simple poem to you

 

More then you know:

 

Eyes like the sky

One look and time flies by

I feel the warmth of your face

As i begin to trace

Every line, every scar

That helps define you who you are

But beneath this exterior

Lies something superior

A woman that is true

And feels exactly like i do

 

The deeper i look, the longer i stare

The more i see all that is there

You are so much more than you know

And these words will never be able to show

How much i adore you

Or how you taught me to trust

And how much i need you

Or how much i love us

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

.... just two more poems i have written, please give some feedback on them :)

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thanks. thats means a lot :) i'm sure you could. these i wrote to my girlfriend back when we were going out, but now thats over so i figured i would share them with the public. just try your hand at it, i'm sure you would do just fine. all you have to do is write down what your thinking and make it rhyme lol.... simple as that

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1 word, 1000 meanings, 2 syllables. Coolio! I have never viewed the creativity topic before. Anyways your poems are quite good. Keep up the good work if you are going to make more poems. I used to make parody for songs, until 1 of mine went too far and I got banned on one of the forums for it. Eh... hope to see more of your poems around xD

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