anwiii 17 Report post Posted May 29, 2010 the games people playthe targets they preywith nothing to sayday after daybad dreamssilent screamsbroken seamsa trusting thoughwhile friends are soughtthe truth has been caughtwhile friendships rotgrowing hatewithin a locked gatei sit and waitdecaying fatea darkened suna loaded guna neverending re-runthe end has begunmy soul i sellat the sound of the bellthis is hellcan't you tellno lightan endless fightno truth in sight24 hour midnight Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Hurt4love 2 Report post Posted June 4, 2010 I didn't know you could write poetry anwii! Well it is good and this is a nice one! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
OpaQue 15 Report post Posted June 4, 2010 I didn't know you could write poetry anwii! Well it is good and this is a nice one! Same here.... I wonder who he is missing. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
deadmad7 4 Report post Posted June 5, 2010 Really good Anwiii! I really like how its a 'dark' poem, though its filled with hate and probably depression. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
sukhi 2 Report post Posted June 13, 2010 @Anwii : Nice poem .. it's ryhming is good and even though it is on the negative tone of reality ... it makes for good reading because of the nice rythming and rythmic paragraphs ! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
