My Songs Gryp-ed

[Furor 0]

Apart from my hobby as a graphic and web designer, I like writing songs. I've written 12 songs as yet. This is just one of them. It's called Destroying Myself and was written by me a couple of months ago. Hope you like it. I'd like some comments. I'll post up more songs later.

 

Destryoing Myself

 

I?m walking with my eyes closed

The world stinging my veins; tearing them apart

Giving me a thought; I never thought of before

Leaving me without blood; leaving me without a heart

The fact I fail to realize is that

I?m the one who?s breaking myself

And blaming the world

It?s actually me who needs all the help

 

These wounds will always remain unhealed

My heart will never stop to bleed

I?m the one who?s ripping myself apart

I?m destroying myself; I?m killing my heart

 

My body is hollow; my soul is blank

I don?t know why I did this to myself

I now wanna come out of the dark

Now I can help myself from myself

The fact I fail to realize is that

I?m the one who?s breaking myself

And blaming the world

It?s actually me who needs all the help

 

These wounds will always remain unhealed

My heart will never stop to bleed

I?m the one who?s ripping myself apart

I?m destroying myself; I?m killing my heart

 

Heal is what I wanna feel

I fail to feel, that what I feel is real

Real is not what would make me heal

And heal is what I wanna feel

 

These wounds will always remain unhealed

My heart will never stop to bleed

I?m the one who is ripping myself apart

I?m destroying myself; I?m killing my heart

Save me

[nancmu 0]

I try to think about the song's melody. Emm.. so hard to think.Anyway i like the song, Emm i mean the meaning and this phrases"Heal is what I wanna feelI fail to feel, that what I feel is realReal is not what would make me healAnd heal is what I wanna feel"I hope i will see all of your songs.

[Raptrex 0]

you should get a microphone and record yourselfand put it on your websitethat would be coolthe song is pretty cool to me

[Furor 0]

Thanks for the amazing feedback guys

I'm planning to compose some guitar riffs for the songs with my college mates and plan to have a proper band as well. Its going to take quite some time while though. I've uploaded all the songs I've written on my old server. Click here for my songs

By the way, I've started working on some new songs as well besides whats on the website. Thanks again guys!