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Time To Be Heard the new beggining

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Time

 

Time to lyricaly spit yet another smash hit

time to show the world the awesome wit

time to summon some knolwedge from the bottomless pit

time to leave you blessed, messed, kissed then bit,

time to lick my lips then sharpen my teeth

time to turn vegitarian while chewing on beef

time to leave you fraustrated with a sense of relief

time to swim three laps of the barrier reef

time to go back to nature and smoke some leaf.

So i guess at the end of the day time is of the essence

that you have been blessed by my presnce

cos i wanna rap more than my christmas presents,

like the finest gift from an expensive shop

i wanna tell my tales and make your jaw drop

i wanna do it like a rabbit and bunny hop

cos i doubt ill make it to top of the pops,

ill not get on a stage and start to choke. No

but the only pops ill make are proberbly coco.

 

Blacker

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Nice rhymes man! Though I'm going to give some opinions:The grammar could be better, but it's fine. You got a lot of imagination to do these rhymes, I suck at it :) And plz do more xD

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Yeah, I agree with SpiderWo- er, SpiderW ^^ It's a good little rap, just the grammar. Though maybe it's a little too short, maybe? I'm no rap expert ^-^;

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ooh, hey that's nice!You could put this as the intro track on your album when you launch yourself. :)It has got rather good content and makes sense. :D

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Nice rhymes man! Though I'm going to give some opinions:The grammar could be better, but it's fine. You got a lot of imagination to do these rhymes, I suck at it :) And plz do more xD

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