My Crazy Poetry

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I like to write poetry when I feel that I can get the most emotion out of what I write. Here are a few of my poems that I have done, and please comment on them! Some of them are considered to be very depressing, from those who I have shown them to, so if you don't like that kind of stuff then you probably won't like reading these.

 

My Life's Eraser -

Hey dad, you let me down,

Hey dad, you let me die with out a sound,

You thought you did well,

But look at my world as it fell!

 

Look deeply into my eyes,

and then smack me until I bleed,

Stand me in that corner,

and watch as mommy says she'll leave,

But you see she couldn't go far, as you knocked her to her knees!

 

You are my life's eraser, and you've torn us all apart,

for you were a monster that killed me from the start!

 

Hey dad, I don't ever want to see you again,

for you are my life's eraser, and never were my friend!

 

 

The Eyes of a Child -

In the eyes of a child,

you won't see a smirk or a smile,

In the eyes of a child,

you won't see tears of joy or happiness,

In the eyes of a child,

death hides in wait,

for in the eyes of a child,

all that child sees is hate.

 

Thunderous Night -

 

I felt the change,

one thunderous night,

I felt the moonlight,

shine on me so bright,

Couldn't you see it?

I know I could.

Couldn't you sense it?

The changes that would.

 

I felt the change,

as the years went by,

I felt the tears dropping on my face,

as I went to cry.

 

Oh dear moonlight, take my soul!

Oh dear moonlight, make me bold!