Poetry Critics Rate My Poem

[lovelylady345 0]

 

the day we are born we are given one gift, life

it is a precious thing for it should not be wasted.

for a parents love is unspeakable for it is true and strong.

knowing that someone is there to lift the curtain of sadness

and dry my tears.for a parents love is the strongest love of all.

 

what do u think?

 

 

 

the day we are born we are given one gift, life

it is a precious thing for it should not be wasted.

for a parents love is unspeakable for it is true and strong.

knowing that someone is there to lift the curtain of sadness

and dry my tears.for a parents love is the strongest love of all.

 

what do u think?

 

in my personal opinion i think it was one of my best poems

 

hello is anyone gonna reply...at all....hello? well this is boring!

 

 

the day we are born we are given one gift, life

it is a precious thing for it should not be wasted.

for a parents love is unspeakable for it is true and strong.

knowing that someone is there to lift the curtain of sadness

and dry my tears.for a parents love is the strongest love of all.

 

what do u think?

in my personal opinion i think it was one of my best poems

 

hello is anyone gonna reply...at all....hello? well this is boring!

 

anybody home hello ok this sucks.....................

[Cody 0]

 

the day we are born we are given one gift, life

it is a precious thing for it should not be wasted.

for a parents love is unspeakable for it is true and strong.

knowing that someone is there to lift the curtain of sadness

and dry my tears.for a parents love is the strongest love of all.

 

what do u think?

in my personal opinion i think it was one of my best poems

 

hello is anyone gonna reply...at all....hello? well this is boring!

anybody home hello ok this sucks.....................

 

i like them.. i write poems my self.. so i should know what im talking about.. i really like it.. you should keep it up.

[leeleelee 0]

Nice poem - It is for Mothersday. I give it a score of 15/20

[lovelylady345 0]

Nice poem - It is for Mothersday. I give it a score of 15/20

thanks i thought that one up when i was at school during study hall.