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My First 2 Sig first

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after reading few tutorials about crafting sigs, i tried making 2 sigs and it took me 5 hours...

its not that good actualy but its my first so what do you expect :(

anyway.. any bad comment? include some good ones so you wont break my heart...

 

this is the first one..

 

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and here is the second one.. which is much more worst than the one above it :(

 

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so what do you think?

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-The coloring is decent

-The text has too much of a bevel on it.. try flattening it down a little bit by lowering the 'Depth' and 'Size' of the bevel.

-The text could use some outer-glow effects perhaps to try to bring it together more with the background..

-The duplicate of the head with the transparency could use some other effects on it to make it look more like background and less like just a translucent duplicate.

-Perhaps a border around the image itself to kind of seal it off.. gives it a more finished look.

 

 

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-I like the background quite a bit more on this one.. but the blue and blue/white lines and flares would probably look better in a brighter red to bring it into the background.. the blue contrasts with the red and it makes it look wierd.

-The renders are both done quite nicely.. the lighting and shading are just right and the color is good.

-I like how the text is pulled into the background on this one.. perhaps it would be better with some glow or something just for a LITTLE bit more definition.. otherwise it's fine.

 

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Great job on both of the images man! Keep it up!

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Zythrix pretty much covered it. But, to add to what he said. Yes, both could use a border, but since the images are basically monochromatic, i would suggest some kind of 3-pixel border for each. First pixel, the outer-most border, should be black for both. Inner-pixel's color should relate to the color the sigs are based on. And the inner-most pixel, should be black.

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