selim 0 Report post Posted November 14, 2005 A poem someone made up ages ago which I semi remember so I can't take all the credit for it. Hope you like it. I sat today and thought alot About these feelings that I've got. About all the good things in my life The things I treaure deep inside. My heart is like the universe Its got the sun, the stars, the years. Although the sun shines warm and bright Its still raining in my eyes. Because without you by my side, The orbit in my heart just aint right. You tell me that you love me too And I hope that it is true. Because if you'r lieing My heart would go boom. I've never been so sure About anything before. But this time I know it's true Were not meant to be as two. Were meant to be together As one forever and ever. Bit cheesy and I know and some bits don't ryhme but it still works. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
switch 0 Report post Posted November 14, 2005 yeah that's kinda cool, although i'll agree that some bits are cheesy.... how awesome is love!! actually i wrote something about it once... this is taken from my website http://forums.xisto.com/no_longer_exists/ in the life->my reflection section... this is from the 9th of April 2004 ( i was 14!! lol) LovePowerfulBeautifulAll it takesis a smile.All it takesis a wave.Know that lovemakes so much differenceFor if man is not lovingman is not man.LonelinessIt hurts more than any wound.Incredibly potent.Incredibly poisonous.We weren't made to be alone.But some hide from love.Some hide because they are scared.Some hide because they are scarred.Some hide because they are scared of hurtingThe ones that they love.Love can change a world.They don't want to bleedbut they believe there is no other way.Do they not realise?They can no longer feel loveAs it guarantees insecurityIn a cold worldWhere you are told'You will bleed morewhen you are insecure.'Trust is beautiful.Trust is love.But Trust is rare.Why do they not see?Why do they not acceptthey can beloved as themselves?Why do they change?What drives them?Insecurities.Insecurities.Love they ignore.Heal yourself.Be insecure.But at the same timesecure in my trust.Why?Because I love you. peace out Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
itssami 0 Report post Posted November 14, 2005 Wow ....It is very nice poem...."MY heart is like a universe......" yeah seems to be very nice and full of feelins... A poem someone made up ages ago which I semi remember so I can't take all the credit for it. Hope you like it. I sat today and thought alot About these feelings that I've got. About all the good things in my life The things I treaure deep inside. My heart is like the universe Its got the sun, the stars, the years. Although the sun shines warm and bright Its still raining in my eyes. Because without you by my side, The orbit in my heart just aint right. You tell me that you love me too And I hope that it is true. Because if you'r lieing My heart would go boom. I've never been so sure About anything before. But this time I know it's true Were not meant to be as two. Were meant to be together As one forever and ever. Bit cheesy and I know and some bits don't ryhme but it still works. 204613[/snapback] Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
