Let Me

[xereo 0]

let me kiss your skinlet me show you my lovelet me say... i love youlet me stay with youlet me have to youlet me feel the soft aroma to me.

[nelimitat 0]

This poem? is interesting but I don't know how to say: it's very short.You could some more delicate words to show your love

[Dragonfly 0]

It is interesting to see your poem but it is too short and contains very less credibility to be counted as a poem. If you compile more it will not only look like one but will also fetch you some more credits for your account as well. I also want to suggest you that you must put a more descriptive subject for your thread. 'LET ME' says very little about the content of your posting. YOu could also indicate something like this 'Let me - a poem for my love' - something like this so that members who see the last topic posts or replies on bottom page can see what you are writing. Otherwise they are wasting their precious time seeing your post. I hope you can become a very active and effective and productive member. Welcome .. though

[xereo 0]

thanks dragonfly i hope too.

[exhale 0]

seems like a song lyrics thing =) sounds good (;