katagirl3000 0 Report post Posted October 9, 2004 Today Today's a new day, I'm going to start fresh. All of my other days were so much a mess. But no, not today. No, not again. Today won't have the same kinds of sin. Yes, yesterday was bad, but today is brand new. The sun is shining-the clouds are so few. I can't make the same mistakes that i've made before. I will not walk through the misery of that wide open door. I wrote this as a reminder to learn from my mistakes. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
qingtian 0 Report post Posted October 10, 2004 Hey, that was a pretty good poem... good rhyming structure. I liked it, keep writing Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
katagirl3000 0 Report post Posted October 10, 2004 aww thanks. I didn't expect anyone to read my poem I'm off to read your poems right now. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Roahl 0 Report post Posted October 26, 2004 pretty egood. I like it and it serves a good purpose.It's indeed a nice and (pretty) good poem. And what I like about it, it has some meaning. Not some text just made to write something. . .if you know what I mean Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
hulunes 0 Report post Posted October 26, 2004 it's a nice works u did.i like the poem very much by heart to appreciate it... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Dreamer 0 Report post Posted October 27, 2004 Nice words. I think you made some kind of big mistake and that was so hard for you. Well you know we live we learn.How abou know your write us some love poem To put us in a good mood. I wold of writed myself but i don't have the inspiration, or i would of copyed for the net. So, i'm waiting forward. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
ljiljana 0 Report post Posted November 1, 2004 Its nicely, you offer your own expperience to utillize in future, but ussually, everybody learns in own errors. Its help to us to learn to sooner. So, accept your own errors, you are super, together with your errors. Beleive me, I have that problem too. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites