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Today one of my poems

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Today Today's a new day, I'm going to start fresh. All of my other days were so much a mess. But no, not today. No, not again. Today won't have the same kinds of sin. Yes, yesterday was bad, but today is brand new. The sun is shining-the clouds are so few. I can't make the same mistakes that i've made before. I will not walk through the misery of that wide open door. I wrote this as a reminder to learn from my mistakes.

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Hey, that was a pretty good poem... good rhyming structure. I liked it, keep writing :)

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pretty egood.  I like it and it serves a good purpose.

It's indeed a nice and (pretty) good poem. And what I like about it, it has some meaning. Not some text just made to write something. . .if you know what I mean <_<

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Nice words. I think you made some kind of big mistake and that was so hard for you. Well you know we live we learn.How abou know your write us some love poem <_< To put us in a good mood. I wold of writed myself but i don't have the inspiration, or i would of copyed for the net. So, i'm waiting forward. :blink:

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Its nicely, you offer your own expperience to utillize in future, but ussually, everybody learns in own errors. Its help to us to learn to sooner. So, accept your own errors, you are super, together with your errors. Beleive me, I have that problem too.

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