Save Me From Hell - * Most Hit Song * MOST HIT SONG BY ME AND MY BAND

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Edited February 28, 2007 by BordaForx (see edit history)

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Sory, I put *yes*, instead of (yes).

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CAPS = screaming

(text)=whispering

________Save Me From Hell___________________

How can you see through my eyes

When the blinds are closed

Leave me here in this court

When nothing comes around

 

Give me a hit

This spirit is going through me

Stepping on the cold floor

It, never ends

 

Give me all I got

I JUST WANNA DIE

SAVE MEEEE

Save me from hell

 

I know you can't even be here

You can't leave me here

It makes me down

Bring me to you

 

give me all I go

I JUST WANNA DIE

SAVE MEEEE

Save me from hell

 

*yes*

 

I know I will succeed

I believe I will do it

Lay there, cold floored

From here, and there

 

I can see it

I know

I feel it

Hold me close to you

 

All my life

I've been undone

I'm so p****** I don't even know what I'm doing

I gotta open my eyes to see whats HAPPENING!

 

BRING ME BACK FROM HELL

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

Save me from this hell

Bring me back here, unit I leave

 

I KNOWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW

 

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

 

Bring me back from hell

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I gotta say this, one of the best tunes me and my band wrote. I love it. I really like it.

 

So I need comments on this one.

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Well, there's a worldwide bestseller called "More Then A Carpenter" by Josh McDowell (I just bought it as a paperback for 5 dollars a few days ago ). Anyway, your poem made me think of this part of it from page 119:

 

    Oh, I fooled them in the university.  They thought I was one of the happiest-go-lucky guys around.  During the political campaigns we used the phrase, "Happiness is Josh."  I threw more parties with student money then anyone else did, but they never realized my happiness was like so many other people's.  It depended on my own circumstances.  If things were going great for me, I was great.  When things would go lousy, I was lousy.

    I was like a boat out in the ocean being tossed back and forth by the waves, the circumstances.  There is a biblical term to describe that type of living:  hell.  But I couldn't find anyone living any other way and I couldn't find anyone who could tell me how to live differently or give me the strength to do it.  I had everyone telling me what I ought to do but none of them could give me the power to do it.  I began to be frustrated.