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Betrayed A song I wrote for fun. The words= stupid. The song=cool

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Please, answer. I want to know if words are good. ( I think they stink ).I know the notes are good, but words. Please post your comments!

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Seems like a Linkin Park inspired song; I mean most of the lines of the song sound pretty simillar.

It's pretty decent. I like what you're trying to convey. Pretty good. Nice work. :D

You should add more to this song and try to express more emotion. This would help to convey your feelings more through this song. I like how you made stuff clear about what verse of the song fits for the rap, and which one has a scream. Nice work overall. :D

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