BordaForx 0 Report post Posted June 11, 2005 (edited) <deleted by me> Edited February 28, 2007 by BordaForx (see edit history) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
BordaForx 0 Report post Posted June 11, 2005 Please, answer. I want to know if words are good. ( I think they stink ).I know the notes are good, but words. Please post your comments! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Furor 0 Report post Posted June 11, 2005 Seems like a Linkin Park inspired song; I mean most of the lines of the song sound pretty simillar. It's pretty decent. I like what you're trying to convey. Pretty good. Nice work. You should add more to this song and try to express more emotion. This would help to convey your feelings more through this song. I like how you made stuff clear about what verse of the song fits for the rap, and which one has a scream. Nice work overall. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
BordaForx 0 Report post Posted June 11, 2005 (edited) <deleted> Edited March 4, 2007 by BordaForx (see edit history) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites