b4thedawn125 0 Report post Posted June 5, 2005 Goodbye I've become a magnified part of my personality Trying to think deep thoughts and getting angry at my simplicity I've become a joke to me Lost my real self, for someone else and now it must all come back you see Melancholy and brooding dark sides When reality is just happy-go-lucky Optimistic, but realistic my pains don't run that deep Flick of a bic and it's all bathed in light Nothing means anything not even last night Put on a happy face and dream everything is alright You haven't really got a clue What it all means to you Slip sliding away Slip sliding away Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
kahat 0 Report post Posted June 5, 2005 Good job. I hpoe you won't say good bye to this forum. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
unicornrose 0 Report post Posted June 5, 2005 That is a nice poem. I can feel some real emotion in it. Probably because I understand those emotions well. I am dealing with simular feelings.I do hope that you have found this forum interesting and fun so far. Its a great group of people. Anyway welcome to it and please do not hesitate to post and chat with the other members. Most of the time questions are welcome too if you get lost or confused.... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
OpaQue 15 Report post Posted June 5, 2005 first I thought ur saying goodbye to Xisto Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
john_meikle 0 Report post Posted June 5, 2005 I thought he was saying Good Bye to this Forum aswell, Good Job He didn't leave Xisto for another Free Host, but if it was a paid host I would understand :DSo Good Job of Not Leaving, and Nice Poem, Quite Sad, lol Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
ashiezai 0 Report post Posted June 5, 2005 Good poem .. but dun be too sad ...Xisto is here with you Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
lordofthesabbath 0 Report post Posted June 7, 2005 Really terrific poem man, really felt the emotion in it. I havnt been able to come up with anymore stuff:( Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
missalex 0 Report post Posted August 6, 2010 At first I did think you were leaving this forum. Bravo! Great poem, I was trying to understand it and yes, you can actually feel the emotion. I don't think you should try pretending to be something you are not feeling, but then again most people keep everything inside. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
