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Goodbye Good Bye Poem

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Goodbye

 

 

I've become a magnified part of my personality

Trying to think deep thoughts and getting angry at my

simplicity

I've become a joke to me

Lost my real self, for someone else and now it must

all come back you

see

Melancholy and brooding dark sides

When reality is just happy-go-lucky

 

Optimistic, but realistic my pains don't run that deep

Flick of a bic and it's all bathed in light

Nothing means anything not even last night

Put on a happy face and dream everything is alright

 

You haven't really got a clue

What it all means to you

Slip sliding away

Slip sliding away

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That is a nice poem. I can feel some real emotion in it. Probably because I understand those emotions well. I am dealing with simular feelings.I do hope that you have found this forum interesting and fun so far. Its a great group of people. Anyway welcome to it and please do not hesitate to post and chat with the other members. Most of the time questions are welcome too if you get lost or confused.... :D

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:D I thought he was saying Good Bye to this Forum aswell, Good Job He didn't leave Xisto for another Free Host, but if it was a paid host I would understand :DSo Good Job of Not Leaving, and Nice Poem, Quite Sad, lol

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At first I did think you were leaving this forum. Bravo! Great poem, I was trying to understand it and yes, you can actually feel the emotion. I don't think you should try pretending to be something you are not feeling, but then again most people keep everything inside.

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