"double Minded Misery" A poem I wrote

[Reduced Logic 0]

I don't write poetry all that often, but I'd like to write more of it. What do you think about this one?I know nothing but this danceScripted by the master puppeteerHeld prisoner in the rhythmDoubly bound by fearI have rejected the call of freedomAnd embraced all I?ve ever hatedInnocence lost with the father of liesThe death on his lips I have tasted

[lordofthesabbath 0]

I don't write poetry all that often, but I'd like to write more of it. What do you think about this one?

 

I know nothing but this dance

Scripted by the master puppeteer

Held prisoner in the rhythm

Doubly bound by fear

I have rejected the call of freedom

And embraced all I?ve ever hated

Innocence lost with the father of lies

The death on his lips I have tasted

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I liked it, very good man, for a starter