My Creativity..not Sense It Make.

[Donegal 0]

Okay, I can easily think up plots for story, but, my problem, is I tend to go away off the subject, and it comes out all random, with me just writting what's in my mind at that present time. Reading back over it, I still see it making sense, but others have problem understanding it.. any ideas on how I could possible fix my problem..

 

It is also becase of this problem I shall be using this topic as my creativity topic.. so ..um, add your name to a list, if you want to be in a story, it's more of a script than a story, or if you wish to be in a cartoon. it's ASCII based

 

two's company, threes a crowd

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Kook : I brought you a present

rikku :AAh

nin - Thats it..riiight there...serrve..iit.

 

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Rikku : AAh

Nin : push harder.

Kook : oh...kay.. I think I shouldn't be here

 

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kook : *Runs*

 

Meanwhile in the back garden...

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Rikku : OKAY, now this time, you push me on the swing.

Nin : Okay..