katagirl3000 0 Report post Posted October 10, 2004 wow that was very nice. I'm serious your words really gave me some emotion. It made me feel peaceful in the very beginning, then a little nostalgic towards the middle and then a little sad towards the end. The best type of art is the kind that gives a person emotion so i'm very happy with your poem. And i think you're right, i don't think the title has the magic that the rest of the poem has. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
