demongaara 0 Report post Posted April 13, 2005 a little voice told me not to go but i was a fool and i had to the sun faded as i went deeper no sense of whats to come the trickle of water on the walls illuminated my thoughts the sweet smell of dew the whisp of dark shrouded me in happiness the crystal roof shimmered i have found my place no more fears the outside world is gone no more worries no more bothers... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
=Savage= 0 Report post Posted April 13, 2005 awwr thats great man, well done Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
ameribass 0 Report post Posted April 18, 2005 A job very well done. I like the poem a lot. Very good imagery. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
