Hi guys im a student from australia and i hope this is the right forum to post this. anyhow one of my passions is filmmaking and i was just thinking why not get some feedback from people on here. anyhow this short film was made for a competition last year 2008 which with some luck i won. it had to fit the theme of 'shoes'. the storyline is a bit jumbled and out of place etc and rushed and it was really just a means for me to work on all of the different parts of making it - cinematography, editing, effects - for my university portfolio. anyhow id love some critical feedback. not so much on the story, more on what other choices i could have made in the film. thanks very much here is the film on youtube it goes for 5 minutes exactly: http://forums.xisto.com/no_longer_exists/