bluemoon32

Wow! That was really, really good. I loved the rich imagery and the delectable phrases. Death of Petals is truly a lovely poem! EDIT: So is Traitor! Very thought-provoking. Excellently done.

For a moment,Everything is quietEverything is on the edgeWe are frozenWith a perfect viewFor a moment,The noise seems to stopOur constant battle ceasesWe hang, barely balancedWe could go up or downFor a moment,Time is electricSparks replace bloodThe danger is mist in the airI don't think of breathingFor a moment,Anything could happenWe could fall or we could riseEverything is crystal clearI see through all deceptionsFor a moment,Everything is quietEverything is on the edgeWe are frozenWith a perfect view----What do you think?