OK, here are some of the poems I have made up for my own entertainment, so I decided to post them for everyone else, please rate my poems from 1-10, and tell me if there is anything I should work on. ^^ I like writing poems. Especially limericks, concrete, and free verses. And please keep in mind this is my first post. And I will edit this when I feel like being creative. Here they are:
Limericks:
THE YELLOW MEADOW I hopped in the meadow and onto a tree, Something yellow i see, what a wonderful surprise I've seen, I think my sight was a little too keen, that sun was a little too mellow for me.
A LITTLE LOVE With a little love, You can fly on that dove, But don't try it, and I'm not calling you a siss, Flying would be teaching yourself to throw yourself at the ground and miss, Hope you won't see what's above.
My Made Up Poems.
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OK, here are some of the poems I have made up for my own entertainment, so I decided to post them for everyone else, please rate my poems from 1-10, and tell me if there is anything I should work on. ^^ I like writing poems. Especially limericks, concrete, and free verses. And please keep in mind this is my first post.
And I will edit this when I feel like being creative. 
Here they are:
Limericks:
THE YELLOW MEADOW
I hopped in the meadow and onto a tree,
Something yellow i see,
what a wonderful surprise I've seen,
I think my sight was a little too keen,
that sun was a little too mellow for me.
A LITTLE LOVE
With a little love,
You can fly on that dove,
But don't try it, and I'm not calling you a siss,
Flying would be teaching yourself to throw yourself at the ground and miss,
Hope you won't see what's above.
^That was random, i need rhymes, LOL.^
Concrete:
Thinking of one. =P