Hey there,I'm a 20 year old film student and I am planning to join a short film competition. I have a script in hand already and I would like to know your opinion on it.It's a narrative story about a dead girl's regrets about friendship, love and family. (The twist is that she is actually dead throughout the film will be revealed at the near end of the film). I posted this script here to hear other people's opinion, suggestions and critical analysis on how to improve the film. Is the pace too fast? Is the twist too predictable? is there some scenes you guys want to add or delete? I'm open to any criticism as long as it helps improve the film.I have attached the PDF format of the script here. Looking forward to your opinions and suggestions.Thanks!
Regret Script.pdf
