For the 1st time, yea it's good. In fact, it's waaaaay better than the first rap I wrote =DBut like Sonic said, the subject doesn't have to be "gangsta-style" you know?I mean if that's what you are going for, there's no limit, but I think the general public is kind of sick of "pimpy" raps =DTry to write with subjects about your life events and complication for practice.But anyways, good job!(P.S. I've been writing raps for about 4 years now. Still a noob but =D)